Page Seventeen

posted 19th Oct 2015, 10:36 AM

Page Seventeen
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19th Oct 2015, 10:36 AM

Callow

into the village. weird looks get got, a heckler arrives to heckle whoever pacem is friends with.

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19th Oct 2015, 9:11 PM

ranger_brianna_new

Do I spot a third protagonist? ;)

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19th Oct 2015, 9:36 PM

Callow

just some jerk!

though the other protagonists are also just some jerks, so that doesn't narrow anything down. author ambiguity!

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21st Oct 2015, 4:52 AM

ranger_brianna_new

Nah, I checked the extra art out and (I think, anyway?) the design doesn't seem to match, soyeah, it is just some jerk I guess.

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12th May 2016, 12:14 PM

thewotartmonkey

I need to know now so I don't do that thing I do where I pronounce a character's name wrong for all eternity: is Pacem pronounced "Pach-em" like I think it is?

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12th May 2016, 12:53 PM

Callow

bingo, that's exactly it!

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13th Jun 2016, 7:43 AM

thewotartmonkey

I thought I'd commented on it before, but it looks like I didn't. I just wanted to say I really like that short moment in the second panel. Not a lot of fiction is mindful of things like preferred pronouns, and it's really nice to see it brought up so naturally and casually. I like it a lot. :)

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13th Jun 2016, 9:42 AM

Callow

thank you! gender, sexuality- they're fairly lax things on diculn. writing lucid spring is an exercise not just in changing my own vocabulary, but also in writing something that's very inclusive and also very natural.

i appreciate that you appreciate that!

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